Staying connected


God’s children we all are,

supreme beings – eternal souls.

Connected we are,

at each folds.


Humanly bodies dwelling on earth,

lose our supremacy.

Connected – are we?

Or, trying to connect;

mending each folds.













6 thoughts on “Staying connected

  1. Lovley photos to illustrate ‘Connected’. An interesting questionto end your poem with. One line puzzles me. Did you mean to say ‘loose our supremacy’ or should it be ‘lose’? I can sort of work out how ‘loose’ wpould fit, but can make ‘lose’ fit better.


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