This is a story for Friday Fictioneers, which is hosted by Rochelle. Every week you are challenged to write a 100 word story based on a photo.
Thanks to Jill Wisoff for this week’s photo and also to Rochelle for hosting the challenge.
Thanks to all the readers for their time, too.
It was the beginning of a new ending.
Industrial revolution — they had named it, then.
Today we are suffering… struggling for clean air. Fresh clean air is a luxury only rich can afford, middle class can manage and the poor die.
My daughter hasn’t seen the outside world, yet. She is 3 and suffers from breathing problem.
Today is not my lucky day. The oxygen mask is selling in black — that calls for some action. I’ll be performing a stunt… without safety masks.
My lungs would be exposed to the thick toxic air but I will survive. I’m a stunt man.
Wonderfully crafted around a topical issue, Nice write.
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Thanks Yarnspinnerr.
The photo just called for the story.
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You had me from “beginning of a new ending”. And a clever take on the prompt
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Thanks Neil.
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A dystopian world indeed. Well told.
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…dystopian world indeed.
Thanks Jilly.
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Shape of things to come? Or perhaps they’ve already arrived? We seem to have an epidemic of asthma sufferers which is surely down to pollution. Your story is a sad but believable take on the photo prompt.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Yes, Susan it is a sad state but very true and real. Things always change. I hope they change for better rather than worse.
Thanks Susan.
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WWhat a most interesting – though dark and scary – take on the prompt.
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I know Dale, it was dark and scary but the photo just had me there. With the problems that we are facing regarding high pollution levels and climatic changes all over the world it is terrifying.
Thanks Dale.
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It truly is, Norma.
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😊
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Scary. Let’s hope we don’t reach that point. Some cities are already suffering from air pollution.
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I know Ali. It is terrifying. I hope we can change things for better for our future generations.
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Dear Norma,
Sounds like a bleak existence.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle.
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Interesting rake 🙂
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Thanks Linda. 🙂
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Take, not rake 🙂
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🙂
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It seems a very prophetic story Norma…
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Haha! Andrea your comment just made me chuckle. 🙂
Thanks and nice to see you.
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