This is a story for Friday Fictioneers, which is hosted by Rochelle. Every week you are challenged to write a 100 word story based on a photo.
Thanks to JS Brand for this week’s photo and also to Rochelle for hosting the challenge.
Thanks to all the readers for their time, too.
Once upon a time there was a stranger.
I met him on a boat ride in a quiet little village.
We exchanged a few glances.
It was destiny — we kept bumping into each other.
We ended up on a sort- of- a- date at a restaurant by the lake.
When I reached my home country, I wanted to hear his voice. But I didn’t call him. I — somehow — lost his number.
A year later… I stand at the same place, thinking….
Sigh!
I look at the water playing carelessly. I wish I had given him my correct name at least.
Two ships that pass in the night. Great last line – pretty much closes the door on it.
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Thanks Ali.
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Oh… alas sometimes we do mistakes like that… maybe it was not meant to be though
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Yes, Bjorn…sometimes we do.
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Oh dear, there’s a danger in playing too hard to get.
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I know. But the mind always loves to chatter… he was the one… only if… *_*
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Regrets, I’ve had a few.
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Haha! We all have those boats that have gone by. Sigh! 🙂
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Ah, that’s rather sad – but I think this sort of thing does happen. Nice story!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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I agree with you Susan, things like these do happen.
Thanks for coming by. 🙂
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Dear Norma,
Bittersweet tale. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for reading, commenting and your time Rochelle. 🙂
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The games people play… sometimes nip them in the butt!
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Haha! 😀 That’s sounds right, Dale.
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Well, yes, but I can certainly understood the protective instinct. Perhaps, though, a lost chance at love.
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Thanks Linda. I hope you are feeling better now.
Sometimes we cry for the things that we don’t have or don’t work out and sometimes we cry for things that work perfectly well. Humans! 🙂
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Perhaps it wasn’t meant to be. Nice.
Click to read my 100 Word Story!
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I guess so or who knows?
Thanks for reading and commenting Keith.
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That ‘If only’ moment – if she’d been braver, who knows what would have happened ? Good story.
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I know, sometimes we all suffer from that “If only” syndrome.
Thanks Francine. 🙂
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