Rochelle shares a photo prompt every Friday. She encourages us to write a story in hundred words or less based on the photo. If you’d want to add your story just click at FRIDAY FICTIONEERS to know the details. You can then feed your story to the little blue frog icon there.
This week’s photo is shared by Roger Bultot.
I tied my sneakers, plugged the headphones, set the timer on and started jogging. After jogging for 20 minutes I could see some smoke. So I started following it.
I was standing on a street that looked very familiar. People, fire fighters, a fire truck…became visible to me. I started walking and finally saw the house that was on fire.
It was none other than my ex’s house. I asked one of the fire fighters if someone was injured. He said, “No injuries, we reached right on time.”
“How… did, fire ….?”
“The guy, kept an egg to boil… in a micro and forgot about it…completely… what kind of a person does that?”
“Only a fool,” I said in my mind but all he could see – was a big smile.
Probably a good job he is her ex! He sounds like a complete fool – or perhaps someone used to having others to do things for him. The pampered type. An enjoyable read, Norma.
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He was…. 😉 Glad that you enjoyed it.
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What an unfortunate thing to happen to the ex 🙂
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Thankfully he was not injured. But calling him a fool did make her smile. 😉
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With ex-es like these there is no need to take revenge… Fun read.
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I agree. 🙂
Thanks for coming by.
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That’ll teach him to be a lousy boyfriend! (Glad he wasn’t harmed).
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Hope he has learnt something. 😉
Glad you came by Joy.
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You’re welcome!
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🙂
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Ha.. I can feel there is a good reason he’s the ex.. probably there were some good reason to start with.. sounds like he could become a nominee for the Darwin award.. but at least he will not get any children with the narrator.
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Sometimes looks can be deceiving to get things started. At least now he can nominate himself for the award…something to talk about if goes on a date with someone else. 🙂
Thanks for reading and commenting Bjorn.
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Hehe. Nothing sweeter than a bit of Schadenfreude. Great story.
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It is, won’t you agree. I had to google “Schadenfreude”. I think the story fits its definition. Thanks for the word.
Glad you liked the story. 🙂
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Oh Norma, ex not late?
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Thankfully. It would make sense to say, “better ex than late”. 🙂
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I bet he doesn’t do that again. Being the place was familiar to her, her ex must have got the house in the divorce. He won’t have it long if he keeps up that behavior. He’s fortunate to be alive. Well done, Norma. Good description. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I agree, he must change his habits or he will soon have to part away with his house too. Thanks for your time Suzanne. 🙂
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Dear Norma,
I’d say she and her ex did not part on good terms. 😉 Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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A little revenge. Some karma. A bit of satisfaction perhaps? Well done.
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No revenge but definitely some satisfaction. Glad you liked it.
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Hmmm…guess it was satisfying for her to see that he was useless without her… 😉
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Oh! she did derive some pleasure…certainly. 🙂
Thanks Dale.
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