This is a story for Friday Fictioneers, which is hosted by Rochelle. Every week you are challenged to write a 100 word story based on a photo.
Thanks to Ted Strutz for this week’s photo and also to Rochelle for hosting the challenge.
Thanks to all the readers for their time, too.
The place was filled with joy, laughter and champagne. I was not happy.
I stood where I could see the moon.
Droplets of pearls — her words —fell from my eyes.
“I miss you, mom.”
She wanted to go there.
I run downstairs.
Go to my laptop…log in…fill the form. Hit submit.
“Mom, I’ll go where you wanted to go. Dad’s got a new wife and here’s to my new life. Guide as always.” I speak a silent prayer.
“Moon watch out, I’ll be coming soon.” A promise, I make to the moon.
Dear Norma,
I thought I commented on this, but perhaps I didn’t or it might be in your spam folder. it’s happened before. I believe I said, wistful and poignant piece. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for your kind words Rochelle. 🙂
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I hope she doesn’t regret what sounds like a snap decision – the moon’s a long way!
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I too, hope so Ali. Maybe she finds a boyfriend who isn’t interested in science or who is interested in science… who knows?
Thanks for reading and commenting Ali.
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A moving story Norma.
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Thanks for reading and commenting Andrea. 🙂
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Apt description of the heartbreak that happens when children’s parents split. Touching story.
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Thanks Linda.
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